Otra casa embrujada ...

Esta es una pequeña narración que hice para una tarea de ingles hace muuuucho tiempo , con errores y todo me pareció divertido publicarla , es fácil de leer aun sabiendo muuy poco de ingles.
Espero que les guste y opinen para eso estan los comentarios n.n ...

A cold winter, Sally was dining quietly with her family when suddenly they heard a lound noise that come from the kitchen, so her father went to investigate. Sally was so scared and her mother too!. 

     Suddenly, they heard a scream and she started to cry because her father was in danger, that was his voice! but when she saw his father running back she calmed down, he was very scared and just said -'we have to leave the house, i saw a woman but she was flying!!', so her mother said -'I´m going to pack'- but suddenly they heard another noise , but now it was a voice of two children saying ...'You need to leave this house right now ! to save your lives!'

    So they ran away from their home, just in time! because the house blew up in flames!. 

    When the police arrived they told them about the ghosts in the house ,but they didn't belive them, but when the firefighters put out the fire one of them said - 'the fire started in the kitchen maybe for some gas leak'- and the policeman was surprised ...'like the other fire in this house! So sally's mother asked :'What!? , What happened in this house? nobody told us about a fire!'

    And the man answered ...

'Fifty years ago ... a man tried to kill his wife and his two children so he put poison in the food, they survived it but they couldn't move their bodies so the man set fire the house, unfurtunately, no one survived ... the man died in the house too because he couldn't escape. Nobody knows the reason that, is a very sad story so nobody wants to remember ...'

Escrito por Roo